I'd like to have done more, but there was simply too much going on around the house. Still, I'm not unhappy with the results from today.
I know I need more world building. I've got mostly dialogue and not so much narrative, and in a fantasy, I don't think that works. I'm going to post an excerpt... hang on, I'll go do it right now...brb...
Okay... it's up. It's rough, but it's right here if you're interested.
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Seems like good suspense! Now I want to know who "they" are and why they want Starlynn...
woo hoo!! excellent!
ooh, I love your excerpt and I want more.
I read the excerpt, love the beginning. You jump right in there! Makes me rethink mine, but I won't change it now.
Have a good writing day today!
Oh the GUILT she must be feeling now. They're all dead and it's becasue of her. I hope she gets some sweet revenge along the way...
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